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With Christmas and the holidays coming up and my job search not turning anything up yet, I'm going to be offering writing commissions (again) in an attempt to raise some money.

As mentioned before, my rates are the following:

$5 a page
5 page limit maximum

As to what I'm willing to write about, we can discuss that if you're interested, but just know I'm not writing anything NSFW or kink-based if it involves children or preteens.

You can contact me via comment on here, via note, on tumblr, or you can send me an email

Only send me payment once I've completed the story to your liking. I will NOT accept payment until after I'm done.

If you can't commission me, I would really appreciate it if you could spread the word.
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Hey guys.

So, R.L. Stine is doing a writing contest revolving around Fear Street, his teen-oriented horror novels, and the judging for the winning entry is Halloween.

The contest’s rules are that those who wish to enter have to write a middle section to a story that Stine provides the beginning for. The entries had to be 1000 words or less.

The story is about a girl whose sister has died, and so she gets together six kids under the pretense of a party in order to make them participate in a ritual that will bring the girl’s sister back. In exchange for the life of one of the six kids.

I’d really appreciate it if you guys could read, vote, or just reblog this to help spread my entry around, as I’m really curious about what everyone thinks about what I’ve written.

Thanks in advance you guys.

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It was a day like any other for the wonderfully talented and beautiful Rei Hino.

But something was... off.

Something wasn't right.

After careful contemplation, she realized what the problem was.

There had been a distinct lack of Minako Aino in her day, and she didn't know whether to be concerned and overjoyed by the lack of Minako's... Minakoness.

She decided to ask her friends if they'd seen Minako at school that day. She first met with Makoto Kino, and asked if Minako had been sick.

"I don't know. She wasn't in today and nobody's heard from her, Rei-chan. Did you try your communicator?"

"She didn't answer. I'm starting to worry. The fact that we haven't heard from Minako in this long is a little freaky."

"Ah well, I'm sure it's nothing."

"But I think we should get everyone else together and look into this."

"Well I can't, I have a date tonight. Actually, I have two. I'm seeing Nozaki-kun from the American style football team, AND Shinokaze from the art club! Can you believe it?"

"Wait, you're seeing both of them? How did that happen?"

"I just went up to Nozaki-kun after practice and he started talking about he'd admired me from afar for so long. We set up a dinner date later this evening. And then Shinokaze approached me and went 'You bring out my inner artist' and then he totally asked me to model for him sometime! Gee, you think it might be a nude painting?"

"A nu-Makoto, are you okay?"

"I've never felt better! Well, I gotta run and get ready for tonight. Finally, spring has arrived for Makoto Kino-chan!"

Rei stood dumbstruck as Makoto ran off, giggling to herself and feeling very proud of her upcoming attempt at two-timing. All Rei could think of was how she heard similar words come from Minako not long ago.

She needed to find Ami. She could talk to Ami. Ami was the smart one. She was the sane one. She'd know what was going on.

"And you're saying that Mako-chan sounded almost exactly like Minako-chan?"

"Yes! It was the weirdest thing I've ever seen in my entire life."

"That's really saying something, Rei-chan."

"I know! And you're saying you haven't heard from Minako either?"

"Not once today."

"This has gotta be some kind of weird prank Minako came up with, and she must've dragged Makoto into it against her will."

"Don't you think that sounds a little ex..."

Ami trailed off when she saw the look in her eyes.

"Never mind."

"And I'll just bet that they dragged Usagi into this as well."

"Usagi wasn't in today either."


"She was excused from classes today. Her family had to take a trip to see a sick relative. She won't be back until late in the evening."


"Listen, Rei-chan, I would love to help you figure out what's going on, but after computer club ends I have to head over to cram school."

"Can we talk about this after you're done?"

"Actually, I'm planning on seeing a movie after cram school."

"A movie?"

"I've been looking forward to for a few monthes, and tonight's the only chance I'll get to see it. I have an extra ticket if you'd like to join me. Maybe it'll help take your mind off Minako-chan for a little while."

"Uh, sure. That sounds great. What movie is it?"

Ami-chan grinned like the Cheshire Cat.

"Adults Love XXX."


Rei slowly backed away from Ami, who's coy grin seemed so much like the kind of grin Minako would have when talking about anything called Adults Love XXX. Rei finally ran out of the computer room, fearful for her life and confused as all hell as to what was going on.

First Minako disappears, then Makoto talks about two-timing, and now Ami as well? What is going on? Minako what the hell did you do this time?

When she was far enough away from the school, Rei turned on her communicator watch and tried contacting Minako again. Nothing. Then she tried to contact Usagi.

"Oh Rei-chan!"

"Usagi, quick! How do you feel about two-timing? Do you want to go see Adults Love XXX?"

"What?! What are you talking about?"


"You know unless Haruka-san, Michiru-san, and Mamo-chan are cool with it, Mamo-chan's the only person I want to be with!"

"That... that is actually the most normal answer you could've given considering today."


"Usagi, listen to me. I need you to come home now. Something very weird is going on and I think we're going to need as much help as we can get."

"What? What happened? Did someone get hurt?"

Rei explained everything that happened so far, citing Minako's disappearance and now Makoto and Ami's odd behavior that mimicked Minako's usual tendencies.

"Sounds like Minako-chan's playing a trick on you."

"But how could she convince Makoto and Ami to go along with her? This is too advanced even for her."

"I'll talk to Mama and Papa about trying to get home early."

"Please do, Usagi. In the meantime, I'm gonna look for Haruka and Michiru and see if they can help us find Minako. Call me back if you hear from her."


Rei signed off, and let out a deep sigh over how insane this day was becoming. At least Usagi seemed like herself... for now. But what if whatever is affecting Makoto and Ami will start to affect Usagi as well? What if it affects Rei and she can't stop it? What is going on?

I've gotta find Haruka and Michiru fast before this gets out of hand.

Rei made her way to a payphone and first, she tried to call Minako's home. No answer. She left a message ordering Minako to get back to Rei as fast as she could, because you are planning Minako it's not funny it's sick and I know you're just trying to get under my skin like you always do and it won't work IT WON'T WO-

The machine clicked.

"Damn!" Rei hung up the phone, put more change in the machine, managed to get in touch with Michiru. Jumping past Michiru's passive aggressive trolling tendencies, Rei explained to Michiru that she needed to speak with her and Haruka in person, and that it was an emergency. Michiru told her to meet the two at a nearby coffee shop. Rei knew the place she meant. It was the one that served tiramisu way back when she was still dating Mamoru. It didn't take her that long to get there, but her feeling of unease grew with every stranger she walked past. She wasn't aware blonde hair was becoming so popular again. Hell, she nearly jumped out of her skin when her waitress, who had her blonde hair cut short down to her shoulders, came to take her order. Her hands were shaking as she tried to hold up her coffee.

God I've got to get a hold of myself. This isn't good. This isn't good at-

"Here by yourself?"

Rei looked up.

"Haruka! Oh thank God. Where's Michiru?"

"Michiru had to finish up a painting for her show tomorrow evening, but she said she'll meet us here. Now what's wrong? She said you sounded frantic."

"She didn't explain what I told her over the phone?"

"No. Just something about Minako."

Rei sighed again.

"Sit down, it's sort of a long story."

For the third time today Rei poured her heart out over the strange occurrences, Minako's disappearance, the distubring behavior of Makoto and Ami...

"And coming down here it felt like I was being surrounded by Minako. As a matter of fact I still do! I can't tell if this is some new enemy's plot to take us down or if this is some brainwashing scheme or a bad dream or something! I feel like I'm in a badly-written horror novel, written BY Minako!"

"And you still haven't heard from her?"

"The communicator can't get through to her. I tried calling her house and there was no answer. Usagi hasn't been able to reach her either. I'm waiting to here back from her and in the meantime I told her I'd contact you and Michiru to figure out what was going on. What do you think?"

"What do your instincts tell you, Rei?"

"My instincts are telling me Minako is behind all this, that this is some sick prank to try and get under my skin because this is Minako we're talking about and I have no idea how she managed to get Makoto and Ami involved."

"Do you really think Makoto and Ami would try to trick you like this?"

"Well, n-no, actually. I still don't think they would do something like this."

"Hmm, it sounds to me like maybe Minako IS pulling your leg, but maybe in your uneasiness over thinking about her, you might've misconstrued what Makoto and Ami were telling you."

"You think?"

"Did Makoto tell you she was seeing both of these guys at the same time?"

"No, she just said she was seeing them tonight."

"And did you ask Ami what that movie she was seeing was going to be about? Titles can be misleadng."

"But Adults Love XXX?"

"Ever heard of Naked Lunch?"

"...okay, point. Oh God, I can't believe this. I've been such a moron."

"No you haven't. You just got a little flustered. It happens to everyone."

"Thanks, Haruka."

"No problem, after all, there's no use crying over misspelled silk."

Rei's heart sank to the bottom of her chest.

"What did you say."

"What? Didn't I get it right?" Haruka asked completely sincerely.

"Sorry I took so long, Rei-chan." Rei heard from behind her.

"Ah, Michiru!" Haruka called out.

Rei turned her head around, and what she saw made her scream in horror.

"Michiru! Your hair!"

"Oh, you noticed?" Michiru asked.

"It's, it's, what HAPPENED TO IT?!" Rei lept from the table and backed away from the two girls. The two BLONDE girls.

"I had to shower because I had some white paint spill on me. Did I get it all off?" Michiru ask.

"You, you-" Rei stammered.

Then, she noticed something even worse. As Haruka and Michiru stared at Rei with twin smiles, Rei saw their eyes. Saw that, they were changing color. Changing shape. Becoming a lighter shade of blue. Just like Minako's.

Rei ran from the coffee shop, despite the cries from the two Outer Senshi following after her. Rei ran into a sea of blonde hair, breathless and terrified.

This isn't happening this isn't happening this isn't happening-

Then! A flash of red!

Rei spotted a girl with long blonde hair, wearing a familiar red ribbon, and walking with two blonde guys on each side of her.

"MINAKO!" Rei cried out, and ran up to her no longer missing friend. "What the hell did you do Mina-"

Rei screamed once again as the girl with blonde hair turned around...

And it was Makoto. Or rather, she was looking at Makoto's face. Everything else was like Minako.

"Rei-chan, do you mind? I am on a date right now. Or, do you want to join us? There's always room for one more, Rei-chan. What do you think guys?"

Mako-Minako's male companions turned to face Rei, and Rei went pale as a ghost when she saw THEY BOTH HAD MINAKO'S FACE.

"Always room for one more."

"Always room for one more."


"Hey come back, Rei-chan!"

Rei ran as fast as she could, regardless of who she ran or bumped into.
The only place it seemed logical to go to was Minako's house. It was the only place she could think of that made sense. She had to be there.

By the time she got to the Aino residence, Rei couldn't remember seeing anyone with hair that wasn't blonde. Even though she was exhausted from running and screaming, Rei banged on the front door and shouted at the top of her lungs for someone to open up. She rang the bell over and over again until she accidentally jammed her finger and nearly broke it.

Just then, the door began to slowly open, and Rei barged in without bothering to see who was behind the door.


"I'm right here, Rei-chan."

Rei looked at the top of the stairs, and there she saw Minako illuminated by the overhead light on the ceiling.

"Minako! Is that really you?!"

"I'm right here, Rei-chan." Minako repeated.

"Tell me what's going on! Why is everyone-"

"I'm right here, Rei-chan."

Spoke the Minako who stepped from behind the Minako standing at the top of the stairs.

"Wh, what is this?" Rei whispered.

"I'm right here, Rei-chan." A third Minako spoke at the top of the stairs.

"I'm right here, Rei-chan." A Minako stepped out of the living room.

"I'm right here Rei-chan."

"I'm right here Rei-chan."


Rei stood back until she was right up against the door, shaking her head in total disbelief at the mob of Minakos that surrounded her when she heard-

"Rei-chan, I'm right down here."

Rei looked down.

And saw Artemis.

With Minako's face.


Rei began sobbing hysterically at this nightmare, and began to fiddle with the knob as she tried to leave, not knowing where she could go to get away from all this.




Rei finally got out the front door and ran as fast as she could, ran smack dab into-

"Hey! Be careful!"


Then, through tear stained eyes, Rei saw she had not run into another Minako.


Rei grabbed Usagi and hugged her tight, sobbing hysterically the whole time.

"They didn't get you! THANK GOD THEY DIDN'T GET YOU!"

"I was looking all over for you! Why are you crying?"

"Usagi, we have to get out of here! It's Minako, or Minakos, Minakii, I don't know! But she's everywhere and I don't know what to do! We have to go! They're right behind us!" Rei screamed.

"There's no one there."


Rei turned around. It was true. The door to the Aino house was wide open, but there was no one there. The hallway was empty.

"Where'd they go?! They were just here!"

"Oh, so this is the prank." Usagi said, confused. "I have to say, I don't really get the joke at all."

"It's not a joke, Usagi! I was wrong! There is something horrible going on!"

"Wrong about what?"

"Wrong about Minako and what she's doing! I explained this to you Usagi!"

"This is the first time I've talked to you all day, Minako-chan."

Rei didn't hear that.

She couldn't have heard that.

"Usagi it's me, it's Rei! I told you I can't find Minako but she's everywhere!"

"Minako-chan I don't know why you're tricking Rei but I already know this is a joke so please don't I've already had a long-"


Rei stopped. She saw a reflection in the puddle on the ground.

She saw Usagi.

She saw Minako.

But she didn't see herself.

And then she realized who she was really looking at.

She slowly raised a trembling hand to her head... and felt a red hair ribbon tying back long, blonde hair.

"So where is Rei-chan, Minako-chan? It sounds like you really did a number on her."

And then, Rei, Minako, whoever it was, started to laugh. First a giggle. Then a guffaw. Then a cacophany of hyena noises to mask the sounds of Rei Hino's mind shattering into a million pieces.


"Hey Usagi! I found Minako! Do you see?! Do you see?! I've found Minako! I'VE FOUND MINAKO! I FOUND MINAKO! MINAKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"

The End.



"Rei? What is it?"

"Oh geez. I must've fallen asleep for a minute. I had the weirdest dream. Everywhere I looked people were turning into blonde zombies."

"Blonde zombies?"

"Yeah, and then I turned into one and it was like my mind just snapped. These late nights must be doing a number on me, Calaveras."

"Well, look, Nehellenia has another assignment concerning GENOM and after that it might be our last for a while. Help me with my armor."

Knight Saber Rei Hino helped her compatriot Calaveras into her pink-and-blue armor. Rei then finished suiting up into her green armor.

By day, Rei is a an aerobics instructor who dreams of an international life of success. But by night, she is part of a four woman band of mercenaries who protect the city of Mega Tokyo. They are the Knight Sabers.

Rei and Calaveras joined their leader, Nehellenia, in her light blue armor suit, in the war room. Nehellenia did not have her helmet on, exposing her impressively long, wavy black hair down to her feet.

"We're still waiting for Priss, but in the meantime, I've received word that GENOM's back door political dealings has led to an unsteady alliance with a Middle Eastern power. They're expecting a shipment of combat Boomers later tonight, but word has gotten out that a splinter cell is planning on intercepting those Boomers for the sake of instigating a massacre. After we deal that, I have one other assignment for us, and that's TO DESTROY EVERYTHING THE WHITE MOON PRINCESS HOLDS DEAR!"


"I'm still not happy with my armor's color design. You know I prefer something more festive, like black." Calaversa moaned. "Oh, Priss, you're here."

Priss Asagiri stood slack jaw in the archway of the ready room.




Rei woke up in a cold sweat.

"Rei-chan? What's wrong?" Usagi asked.

"I had that dream again."

"The one about the penguin with the knife?"

"I mean the one where I'm an aerobics instructor and I'm fighting alongside Nehellenia and Calaveras."

"I'm sorry. Do you want a drink of water?"

"No. No I think I'm alright. I didn't mean to wake you. Good night, Usagi."

"Good night, Rei-chan."

"Good night, Rei-chan."

"Good night, Ami-chan."

"Good night Mako-chan."

"Good night Ami-chan."

"Good night Usagi."

"Good night Haruka-san."

"Good night Rei."

"Good night Michiru."

"Good night Michiru-san."

"Good night Makoto."

"Good night Makoto-chan."

"Good night Minako-chan."

"Good night Mina-chan."

"Good night Mamo-chan." Minako kissed Mamoru goodnight.



Minako woke up in a cold sweat. She tried to catch her breath. She looked around. She was in her room and it was a little after 2 in the morning. Then, she got pissed. And proceeded to take a megaphone out from under her bed.

Over at Mamoru Chiba's apartment, he'd been working late on a thesis paper when his phone rang.

"Hello? This is Mamoru Chiba speaking?"


Night of the Living Minakos
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in this story.

A living nightmare in Rei Hino's life.
I went to Lehman today to donate blood, and also stopped by to check what was going on with my diploma and the possibility of getting departmental honors. I received a conferral notice in the mail last Saturday which confirmed I'm a college graduate, but the diploma still isn't ready and I should be receiving a notice in the mail. Also, I didn't get departmental honors. I spoke to Professor Valentine in the history department, and the stipulations are that one must have a total 3.5. GPA in the classes geared towards the major. While I did have a 3.527 GPA, when the credits from the history classes were added up, it came to 3.46. So I missed it by .04 credits. SIGH.

There was at least mention of a cash prize possibility, but it may not be much.

In other news, there was a fire around the corner from my house last Saturday evening. I was heading to CVS for some snacks when I saw smoke emerging from a nearby house, and discovered the basement apartment in one of the houses on Rhinelander Avenue was engulfed with flames. There were others on the sidewalk besides me, and while one of them must've called 911 already, I decided to play it safe and called them myself. While I was talking to the emergency dispatcher, I saw that the front door to the house (NOT the basement apartment door) was wide open. I ran in the house and called out if there was anybody still inside, since it seemed like if the front door was open there must be someone inside. I don't know if the first floor caught on fire but there was smoke, and then one of the neighbors ran in the house past me and must've done a more thorough check, as everybody else was calling at me to get away.

The fire department came while I was still on the phone with the dispatcher, and they put the blaze out before it got worse. It turned out there was someone inside the house when the fire was going. An old woman was still inside the basement when the fire started. The last I heard she was in the hospital and in critical condition.

I went back a little while later because the fire marshal wanted to speak to me about what I'd seen when the fire was blazing.

It's weird. I mean, I feel a little proud that I called 911 and tried to check if anyone was still in the house, but a lot of people have been treating me like a hero. My mother made this post on facebook gushing about what I did and a lot of people responded with positive comments, and I've received a couple of compliments from two neighbors. Other than that, I don't really feel like I did anything.


Also I'm still offering short story commissions.
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Last month, the woman I was a companion to, Olympia, suffered a stroke and went into a coma. Her family decided that she didn't really need a companion anymore if she was asleep, so I was paid for August and that was it. I still have the comic book store but I'm looking for a second job, and in the mean time, I've decided to offer up small writing commissions.

You guys can look through my gallery for examples of my writing.

My rate is 5 dollars a page, with a maximum limit of five pages total. Again that's:

1 Page = $5
Maximum Length = 5 Pages

This would really help out in a tight spot and I'd really appreciate if anyone would be willing to either commission me or mention me to others.

If you're interested, send me a note so we can discuss what you want and what I'm comfortable writing.

Thank you.
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United States
Current Residence: Bronx, NY
Favourite genre of music: Rock, Anime Soundtracks
Favourite style of art: Photorealism, Animation
Favourite cartoon character: Utena, Lightning Lad, Harley Quinn, Oyuki, Priss Asagiri, Batman, Daria, Duela Dent, Sailor Jupiter
With Christmas and the holidays coming up and my job search not turning anything up yet, I'm going to be offering writing commissions (again) in an attempt to raise some money.

As mentioned before, my rates are the following:

$5 a page
5 page limit maximum

As to what I'm willing to write about, we can discuss that if you're interested, but just know I'm not writing anything NSFW or kink-based if it involves children or preteens.

You can contact me via comment on here, via note, on tumblr, or you can send me an email

Only send me payment once I've completed the story to your liking. I will NOT accept payment until after I'm done.

If you can't commission me, I would really appreciate it if you could spread the word.
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Jeirin Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member Professional General Artist
Thanks for the watch!
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:D Thank you very much for the favourite!!!!
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You're welcome. :)
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you're AWESOME!!!
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No you.
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Hardly but you do possess a skilled eye. I'll take the compliment happily.
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Thank you for the watch!!!
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Thank you for faving my drawing "Velocity"!
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